Adamant Eve And The Man Who Wouldn'T Shut Up Poem by Nancy Ames

Adamant Eve And The Man Who Wouldn'T Shut Up

Rating: 4.8


If you can't say something nasty,
don't say anything at all.
You're saying I need rhinoplasty
and I'm riding for a fall?

The sun is shining golden
on the meadow by the lake.
The snow is sparkling cold on
mountain-peaks, for Heaven's sake.

Poetry is pregnant
and the father of the child
says, denying and indignant,
'Oh, no. I must stay undefiled.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 05 August 2008

Clever, I agree. The right thoughts packed into the right length. When I tried this theme, I'm afraid I rambled too long. I thought you did a great job. Adeline

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silver phoenix 01 August 2008

The title is awesome and so is this text, amazing! Thankyou, and please if time permits check some of my work. Thank you and good luck, Kilian

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Daniel Partlow 13 February 2008

Really really clever.

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Nancy Ames

Nancy Ames

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
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