*admittance* Poem by Alien Girl

*admittance*

Rating: 2.8


I was thanked for my honesty today
A noble deed.
The truth unfolded
A validation of an honest woman
But yet I lie
and I lie
and I lie
Just like him
and you
and you.
So where does that leave me
Lying in a cesspool of honesty
Or just merely keeping my head above water
Escaping death only to drown
In your sea of mediocrity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 29 July 2009

loved the way u ended this one. i really liked the last 5 lines. but overall a great piece of writing. i cant wait to read more.

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