Aesthetic. Poem by Marcondes Pereira

Aesthetic.



A world we'd like to share,

it's a perfect place
where we feel, touch and smell grace

In this world, we'd praise mathematics face
While we can't do this. We paint its glare.

Monday, September 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 18 September 2017

Simply lovely, Marcondes! I like your rhyme scheme- - A, B, B, B, A. I much prefer words to mathematics! :)

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Marcondes P 19 September 2017

Hi, dear Poetess. I'm glad to know that you consider my poem lovely. I tried to create something more soft. And I am equally glad to see that you noticed, and liked my rhyme scheme. :)

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