! ! ! ! Again! ! ! ! ! Poem by Nikunj Sharma

! ! ! ! Again! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Roll
of dice;
Hiss
of snake
I am dead.
she rolls
it
only to
find ladder;
climbs up higher
smiles, stops, thinks,
Asks me
to
take chance
again. I try
hard
to
hide my
tears.

# A waltz wave poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

if oyu 'love' her.. chance her again.. :)

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if oyu 'love' her.. chance her again.. :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 November 2009

again as the title says a very naturally done poem with syllables...and a very interesting one too

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Lady Grace 02 November 2009

ok, , again...again...again.... i'll throw a dice in the board of snakes and ladder it marks 10...but snake was there so i throw again the dice for a game its' already a ladder so i climbed again....ok... again...again...again...... it's your turn.....throw the dice...hehehehehhehehe am just in mood dear to write anything..can't sleep....so, , , allow me to write like this in your page....well, i dont know if it fits the topic whch you portray....lavs ya...kisssessssssssssssss

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Susan Jarvis 02 November 2009

An admirable attempt at the Waltz Wave, and your poem is even shaped like a snake! S ;)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 January 2010

A waltz wave poem’ Yeah victory is the ‘thumbs up’ mantra of world…but loosing is a type of gaining...is equal to loosing…a gain…tear hide why… …powerful can smile with defeat… Thanks for sharing…10 Ms. Nivedita UK Dear Poet, Unable to post message… By heart I invite you to my page…and grace by your comments.if you please… Regards niv

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Kimberly Lindsey 28 December 2009

Very good! I love how you do this!

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Ken E Hall 16 November 2009

A great waltz of snakes and ladders well thought out in this original word game in which you are very good at ++++++10 regards

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Deborah Cromer 13 November 2009

Creative and good use of imagination. Expressive and with a twist of emotion. Interesting and fun to read. Debbie

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Sonya Florentino 06 November 2009

very poignant Nikunj...and the wave form helps bring it out..... :)

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