Again and again
The tears and the pain
I can't any more
Take this blame
I never knew that
You're going to be hurt
But I'm just a peace
In a big bad world
You're so disappointed
As anybody else
But would you forgive me
No?
That's what I guess
You didn't even believe
That I'm sorry again
You know why?
Because you're just the same
Again and again
The tears and the pain
I was better when I was
Without a name
hahaha it's so gd poem and some time i wish that u still always depresset so u can write gd poems...jk
Zaynab, first of all congratulations, it is very well written.It is simple yet interesting. Second, if you are going to use poetry just to express your depression, you better find so many different ways to do so. Otherwise all of your poems are going to look alike by their themes and by their structure and style. There's no problem in writing under the same atmosphere, under one subject, all you have to do is to find very interesting and different ways and styles to do so. Third, I see that you have a strong confidence in yourself, that's a very good things. Don't lose it ;)
will sunny... i don't know if i should thank u or not after this comment but in life like mine i'll always keep writing poems like this one
a feely write.... and indeed this theme is repeated again and again.....every where.... keep penning cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some things in life are like that, BUT, with GOD all things are possible.