Age Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Age

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He took another look
while she sat there,
by the half-open curtains,
catching the afternoon sun
in a most unflattering,
even cruel manner.

No, this was not what he,
so many years back
had plucked with eager hands,
while being careful not to
disturb the others, courtesy
would not be wasted on the weeds,
as he remembered, vividly
how he had partaken of them, as well.

There was a mass of jowl jell-o,
suspended from the chin,
as if the hyoid bone
had shat itself.
The oval shape
of her visage was,
to say it with some kindness,
Hiroshima, way after, though.

He rose and wandered into
the fluorescence of the bath.
And took a leak, haltingly,
it was that ancient geezer of
a prostate, man's best curse.

Ready to douse the light
a fleeting look would do,
into the mirror. Blink.

Detouring to the pantry
he poured some red,
first for her, then for himself.
'Here's to your health',
he sang, with
just a bit of humour.
She looked much better
already, sure did.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 19 September 2005

What I think is funny is the men always think they have aged perfectly without the slightest problems but are sure to notice the change in the women. Not fair. I think this was pretty funny....of course this is a worry I have but, I enjoyed it. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 18 September 2005

Hey...some don't mind it too much.....

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Herbert! Some of us age gracefully!

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