sitting on bended knee
waiting for the next technique
Watching as Sensei shows
How things go
perched and ready watching
amazed by the feats of Sensei
Dazzled by the unfathomable feats
He shouts 'GO'
we all jump to our feet
sweating and grunting
We all try our best
Everyone sweating and out of breath
All on the same path
Excellent poem Tiyler, Very well written. Sounds difficult to do.
So the more energy you expend in attack, the more ammunition you provide to your opponent. (If my memory serves me well?) Nice work Tiyler Danny
Ok great free flow Ter.............................nice I can see the sweat man dripping off your face, use of energy, well done dave
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yoi... Tiyler San...torebian... guddorakku... Sensei CJ