A Passing Poem by tiyler durden

A Passing

Rating: 3.9


He sits atop its porcelain
his face red and sweaty
his newspaper welcoming his intuition
His breath hot and clean

his concentration weaning
his body hot and sweaty
he strains
groaning under its pressure

He lets out a grunt like an animal
He passes the stool
letting out a huge sigh
he strains again for the next poo!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elya Thorn 30 January 2006

very interesting! great subject! brought me a laugh ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Tiyler Durden 15 November 2005

Thanks for the reply Charles nad you are correct that there is nothing more to fear than fear itself as death is inevitable!

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Charles Chaim Wax 15 November 2005

the ten thousand dreams of flesh are good for a time and fun for a time but in the end death's breath is more solid than a silver mountain or an iron wall

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