tony atkins

Rookie (19/07/1990 / naracoorte)

Aiming For The Strait An Norow - Poem by tony atkins

strait and narao
makes sence
follow orders
close ur mine
but is it realy woth it
brake the rules
have sum fun
have 3 kids befor ur 21
make it up latter
do some work
look its all the same
strate and narow
dousent make seace
in a free contry they whant u to follow rules
ok scruw them thets go wiled corse a riot
give the priminister the bird

dont aim for somthing thats there life
go ur own way


Comments about Aiming For The Strait An Norow by tony atkins

  • Rookie Red Blooded Black Hearted (12/20/2007 4:17:00 AM)

    My God! ! ! I'm surprised no1s commented on dis poem! It's excellent and truthful! Keep writing: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 28, 2011


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