tony atkins

Rookie (19/07/1990 / naracoorte)

aiming for the strait an norow


strait and narao
makes sence
follow orders
close ur mine
but is it realy woth it
brake the rules
have sum fun
have 3 kids befor ur 21
make it up latter
do some work
look its all the same
strate and narow
dousent make seace
in a free contry they whant u to follow rules
ok scruw them thets go wiled corse a riot
give the priminister the bird

dont aim for somthing thats there life
go ur own way

Submitted: Thursday, December 06, 2007
Edited: Thursday, April 28, 2011

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