Air On The Attack! Poem by M Rene Riel

Air On The Attack!

Rating: 3.5


lurking and hidden
stranger beware
the scent of the night
on a midnight air

creeping through the shadows
heel toe, heel toe
ever so silent
and meticulously slow

his breath is warm
his heart afire and pounding
for he pounces on daybreak
his agility astounding

for he is the night
attire, long sleek and black
for there lurks the forbidden
air on the attack

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 26 September 2009

Rene: Interesting poem and the lack of punctuation is appropriate for this piece. Even leaving off the initial capitalization works well in this case. Keep writing. Adeline

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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