Second Hand View Poem by M Rene Riel

Second Hand View

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Seen from a bus, your second hand view,
But seen by me was perfectly new,
The sun seen rising to meet the new day,
The bus seen continuing on journey's own way,
Impressions of orange ribbon, seen sheered by mountain's earth,
Gave momentum to a day's new birth,
This view ever changing and quickly fleeting by,
Blue now upon you, the day's new sky,
For what I did see was a second hand view,
The beauty, the power, now seen by you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 14 May 2009

Good thoughts in there-a catchy title also. Adeline

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Estrella Baldemosa 30 May 2008

i like this...it could be a second hand idea...

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Will P. Litter 26 April 2008

Very lovely with your use of words.

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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