Treasure Island

R.K Das

(22, january / INDIA)

Alıen Benign


The heart throbs
For you, a kindred soul
Living in an alien land...

What music your parrot twitters?
What fruits your trees bear?
And with what stars your sky glitters?
What wind blows your hair?
What dreams colour your repose,
How elegantly you tread the land,
How softly you breathe the air
What paints your mood
In morning, day and night?

My heart yearns to see
These sights and hear the sounds,
Which you see and hear
In your own way
So different so unique!

Submitted: Tuesday, November 27, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, November 27, 2012

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  • Roseann Shawiak (2/15/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    This poem definitely makes you want to know more about the person in an alien land. It brings up all sorts of imaginative stories with the questions you ask. Very good poem. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Amanda Laurent (11/28/2012 9:47:00 PM)

    I found myself also wanting to know what this person in an alien land feels and dreams! Your words inspire curiosity and seem to whisk the reader away to another reality. (Report) Reply

  • The Reader (11/27/2012 1:09:00 PM)

    What familiar & friendly Alien, and how benign that stirs the imagination of the poet so much that he feels like transporting himself by dwelling upon too much in that alien land of hers --My heart yearns to see
    These sights and hear the sounds,
    Which you see and hear
    In your own way
    So different so unique! ...........
    this is one of those scribes which caught my attention even in the Manuscript stage..............
    simply innocent! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/27/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    A different views can be seen in every side of this poem, a well done poem, i like the ending ended the sound which is contra feel with the first line, keep it up for a nice poem like this_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rumi Roy (11/27/2012 5:46:00 AM)

    Questions for a soul..we are never in short of our queries.We love to know, we love to feel, we love to grasp, no matter where you are.A very fine piece indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rumi Roy (11/27/2012 5:46:00 AM)

    Questions for a soul..we are never in short of our queries.We love to know, we love to feel, we love to grasp, no matter where you are.A very fine piece indeed. (Report) Reply

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