Treasure Island

Kavitha Krishnamurthy

(09 Jan / Chennai)

Alien planet

It was a fresh dazzling day
I gradually openened my eyes
I was in a strange place
That I had not seen before

So much serenity, so much charm
That I had not encountered before
Crystal clear water, milky mountains
Such tasty fruits, the place pollution free

No hatred, no crime, no war and no corruption
The aliens live in a total peace
With much helping tendency, they all live united
My mind and heart were at tranquility
It was a pleasurable experience

Suddenly the vision began to vanish
I was once again back on earth
Seeing a programme on my television
About the life in the other planets

Submitted: Thursday, December 07, 2006
Edited: Saturday, December 04, 2010
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  • Preeti - is here! (4/3/2007 5:44:00 AM)

    indeed, it'd be great if Earth was as peaceful as the other plantes they talk about/show us on Discovery.nice piece! (Report) Reply

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