All Alone In The Mid Sea... Poem by Rajan Dhanaraj

All Alone In The Mid Sea...

Rating: 5.0


i know i am in the mid sea
all alone
waiting for a wave
move me to the shore
i am hearing thunders
i am seeing lightnings
i am waiting for the storm

one day
waves will come
i may reach the shore
but the pity you know
i am a boat
i got my value only in the sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Marvellous. The twist in the end is beautifully rendered

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Seema Chowdhury 18 October 2008

a lovely and simple composition. evvery one and every thing longs for destination.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 October 2008

a boat's life...longing for the shore...destined to function in deep waters only...troubled or untroubled...good meaningful write, Rajan..10

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Raman Savithiri 17 March 2008

Very nice poem. Toches the heart!

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rajagopal haran 19 January 2008

wonderful poem Rajan Dhanaraj..keep writing

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Rajan Dhanaraj

Rajan Dhanaraj

Tirumangalam, Madurai, India
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