All Day It Rains Poem by Raj Arumugam

All Day It Rains

Rating: 5.0


all day it rains
and the lilly-pilly
with her green leaves
and pink flush on her head
stands swaying, swaying, swaying
as gentle or vigorous as the rain and the wind may be;
and there in the distance
a lone bird flaps its wings
moving between giant trees
against the dreary sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 20 May 2009

great imagery and metaphors used.....................10

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2009

Short scenic write, RA...lovely...we just had a drizzle here and i was just back from my garden after watching my lilly there... it's pinky head swaying swaying...yes; i am happy your poem resonated well in my feels on reading...10

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