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(Jan.6,1994 / Lost in a lost place)

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All I Needed Was A Tight HUG...!

The real one which I wrote:

From the onset of my life
where daily my soul cried
for a one who was mine
who would have asked if i was fine
is this enough?
for my life which is rough
from my infancy to now
I want only one thing from everyone but how?
after dealing every situation
after giving any reaction
after crying alone in bed
after being cursed and sad
after getting ready for school
after I was called a fool
after giving my exams
after solving the questions which were damned
after I was awaken hungry
after I was beaten lonely
after I was left alone
after I proposed you
after you said to me NO!
after I was embarrassed
after I was completely depressed
after I attempted suicide
after I was dead but somewhere still alive
All I needed from each one of you was a very very very tight
HUG...!



After reading some comments, I made the following changes for the word, 'after'.


From the onset of my life
where daily my soul cried
for a one who was mine
who would have asked if i was fine
is this enough?
for my life which is rough
from my infancy to now
i want only one thing from everyone but how?
-while dealing every situation
and giving any reaction
-when crying alone in bed
after being cursed and sad
-before getting ready for my school
-for no reason i was called a fool
-after giving my exams
and solving the questions which were damned
-when I was awaken hungry
-after I was beaten lonely
-when I was left alone
-after I proposed you
-on the moment you said to me NO!
-after I was embarrassed
making me completely depressed
-also when I was attempting suicide
and was dead but somewhere still alive
all I needed from each one of you was a very very very tight
HUG...!

Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Edited: Friday, January 13, 2012


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  • Kaitlyn Brock (11/18/2011 1:23:00 PM)

    hugs for everyone great writing :)

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  • Shadow Girl (7/3/2011 3:29:00 AM)

    another hug sent your way - ha ha u'll get claustrophobic! nice writing - keep at it - SG

  • Titiksha Singhal (4/30/2011 9:33:00 AM)

    definately u' recieve a hug frm me...! ! dis poem is full f emotions and precision

  • Jessy Villa (12/13/2010 7:51:00 PM)

    i love both of them to me there great sounds like a guy and me if you wana hear the story just ask

  • Bongani Welcome (12/10/2010 2:49:00 PM)

    greate job, keep writing u so talented man. keep up. i'll keep reading

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (8/6/2010 12:58:00 PM)

    Both poems are much the same, first one appeals to me more. Soul really cries out in the write. Much emotional and spiritual healing needed. Pray your heart be mended with a great big hug! Well expressed; D

  • Katherine Shaw (8/6/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    I will give you a hug, your poems make me sad: (

  • Briannaa Herman. (8/3/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    I prefer the first poem, but thats just my opinion. I do that in some of my poem also, that may be why, .
    I really like the passion with which you write, i can feel the emotion and pain behind this poem. good job! I enjoyed reading this.

  • Ginna Yadav (8/1/2010 11:40:00 AM)

    Your poems are filled with great deal of passion which makes them worth reading... however the source of this passion in your life must be disturbing to you. If you are sad and unhappy... try to find a reason to that. We all commit mistakes... God knows I have not a bundle but an ocean full of them, but heck, so what? What's life without our set of sorrows; what are we to laugh on if they are not there? I am certain, you will find people who will understand you; have some faith.

  • Kelii Rice (7/25/2010 9:47:00 AM)

    After life takes you down, when you stand back up sometimes you need a hug. Hugs make everything better! =) nice poem

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