Alone Poem by Raphael Sackey

Alone

Rating: 5.0


All things never done, done or undone disturbs the neighbour.
I sneeze, John frowns!
I cry, Jane pities!
I cough, Doe sneers!
My music, Tom's noise.
My car, Dick's envy.
My leisure...

Even my leisure is laziness to Harry!
I amble by, Jill and Jack descry an eavesdropper!
I love my own wife, the kids jeer through my window.
I fart, Raphael cries blue murder!

Only alone, can I truly be.
Only alone will I know my true self.
For when the neighbour is absent, when there is no one to be disturbed,
Then my attitude can change; my deeds allowed uncensoring.

Yet loneliness is such a rare treasure in our days.
Days of civilized man.
Man the plagueless breeder.

How then am I to know myself?
How then am I to test my character when no one is watching.
When my mental voice roars John Wooden's words.

Perhaps I can watch and learn from the Greenback Boogie
And live my life in the most private studio of man.

Tuesday, December 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy,pretence,privacy,thoughts,truth,wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Why does a person's behavior change when they are alone (as opposed to when they are among others): and does that change have to happen or can it be stopped? Turns out, it has to happen and people actually like that change. That is why no matter how happy you are in the company of others, you will always end up seeking privacy at some point.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 31 December 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Raphael.

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