tami alshamsi


Alone (2)


alone wherever I go
alone whatever I do
alone all the time
alone what I should do

alone in every day
alone in every way
alone all the time
alone I am agonizing with each passing day



alone I wanna suicide
alone no one in my side
alone all the time
alone I will suicide

alone I cant sleep at night
alone I am shaking from the fright
alone all the time
alone I`m gonna end this loneliness tonight

alone I cry
alone I fail when I try
alone I lived all my life
and here I am.. alone I die

Submitted: Monday, April 25, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, October 17, 2012

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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (8/18/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    I know how you feel. I am the same, and although it is very painful to be alone in life, there is always a hope that someday our situation will change. I love your poem (Report) Reply

  • Mia Zeglinski (7/21/2013 10:54:00 PM)

    Yhea, Being Alone Is Hard: /
    I feel like that....
    Sometimes I actually bring the knife to my throat, or the rope to my neck....
    I never CAN do it....
    I do WANT to DO IT
    I don't know why people make other people feel so SMALL in life....
    I'm all alone...
    I have nobody to go to...
    Stay Strong!
    Don't end Up like Me
    Or Amanda Todd!
    -Mia (Report) Reply

  • Lidia Schaffer (11/7/2012 2:38:00 PM)

    this poem hurts me but goes into the depth of pain that the writer is feelin, Keep your head up! ! Never solve a situation with suicide! ! Lidia (Report) Reply

  • William Kd (10/10/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    Better to feel lonliness than to not feel at all in death. Poetry shows beauty even in misery. (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/21/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    You have a chance to feel alone, fri.....But you shouldn't try to suicide alone as in your poem! After learning from being alone, Just go on trying to find out how to beat being alone!
    This is just my opinion, might be right or not!
    Thanks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Yvonne Selase (8/3/2012 11:31:00 AM)

    it made my cry....my boyfriend ended things with me today., ....we love each other but his family hates my guts and he says he, ld rather set me free so i dont cry any more but right now i just want to die....i even thought of suicide but i cant do that to my mum....im just so alone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 518 Points Kee Thampi (4/26/2011 1:15:00 AM)

    alone I cant sleep at night
    alone I am shaking from the fright
    alone all the time
    alone I`m gonna end this loneliness tonighte of

    very emotional writes (Report) Reply

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