Treasure Island

jamie newcomb

(10-24-97 / Hattisburg MS)

Alone


I try to make you proud
But you turn from the facts
You just keep beating me down

You say cause you love me
Cause you wont something out of me
You execpt better

Nobody sees my pain
Cause im locking it up
Im trying to hold back from everything

If you could undersand
If you coud feel what im going though
You might know how i feel for once

You dont want to execpt the facts
You want to engnore it all
And i dont get anything

No thanks
No im sorry
No i love you

And now i say
Thanks for....
NOTHING

Thanks for nothing at all

This life is empty
And its not easy

And im try in to get through it all
Get through it all with out you

Submitted: Saturday, May 21, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

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