Alone Poem by DL Mondays

Alone



Alone amidst a crowded room…
A place of death that cradles doom…
A dungeon where no roses bloom…
A room where in lone hearts go bloom…

This feeling mine so dark and blue…
That death cheers up forever’s due…
A life of mine where black will hue…
Will lead me lost without a clue…

To life one’s end that’s running near…
I’ll make a light so deep sincere…
A spark so bright and crystal clear…
But none will see this love within…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 September 2011

I SO LIKE THE FIRST PART A VERY IRONIC SCENE ALONE IN A CROWDED ROOM-MAGANDA AND THE LAST PART NONE WILL SEE THIS LOVE WITHIN HMMM, THERE WILL BE THAT SOMEBODY WHO WILL SEE THAT LOVE WITHIN JUST WAIT FOR THERE WILL ALWAYS BE A PERSON WHO SEES BEYOND AND WHO UNDERSTANDS EVEN YOU WILL NOT SAY A WORD. ENJOYABLE WRITE.

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