Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 249 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Alone, The Murder - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

The house was empty
The voices were just vanity
They were just panty!
I was alone on the sofa
Listen to the beat of vodka
That was just beating my head
Just in this time and after…
I was thinking, blinking, I was watching, then sitting
I had seen a cat with a great tail
Wait a minute …that was hail!
Thinking now, thinking then, and thinking about the stupid sake!
Sitting, around the flat dish,
Jerking with the other's pish!
The bottle of vodka …that's finish!
I was alone in that world, the world of the wolfs, the world of the coals!
I was ignored in the black line…
But somebody told me: how are things?
This was the first time of my feels,
That some bodies just told me how your feels are!


Comments about Alone, The Murder by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (8/21/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    i loved, i loved this one...i don't wanna describe... just perfect.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lola Smith (9/15/2012 12:18:00 PM)

    Wow.good and different.but very good thumbs up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 21, 2012



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