Lonely nights are gone till the day I found you
Emptiness in my heart are now filled with love
My heart and my mind keep saying I love you
Always and forever...
The moment I' m with you roses filled the air
All I want is to hold you forever
All I need is you more everyday
You brighthen up my world which is use to be dark
This three words I say to you I love you more than ever
This love for you will remain true and pure
Until my life will reach the end of the string.
Always and Forever.
Well-written and intensity of emotions woven effectively in the free verses.10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Until my life will reach the end of the string. love that line :) i want to give you my honest opinion and everyone has different opinions, but i hope u can take with a pinch of salt. Ill try make it a constructive criticism :) i think there is alot of potential in your writing however it would be nice to read and feel imagery and metaphors from it as i think that shows more of a skill. please dont hesitate to read any of mine and let me know what you honestly think. :) thanx