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Patricio MenesesCarrington


An Advert For Life


Standard Issue
Will you take these limbs
Things you are given
Take these pulsing hands in deep cognition silent planted
Can we see the treasure of our glands
Loose parts not one discounted
To not debase our hearts of ace in basined fountain
Can we take our eyes and lips and teeth
Can we value in our timed watch a value incomplete
Can we feel warmth in a symbol smile
And treat it differing from advert dark brightness
Can we hiss upon a star and mean our ink on time vacant rivers
Can we learn to lean as in a dream
With ease divide the solitary springs
Can we internalise the film
to teach us sight's significance within.
That actors indi undress in vacuum spin
Can we believe in ticking forward hum
And laugh the spokes and spikes of mirthfrilly fun
Can we in heat deceiving timefull grin
Leave is for now and buffer sure and knowing breath
untempered by another falling step
That leave my inn print
As a wanting static vessel in wanting for an overview
Zoom in and out and stop not for a breath
Believing in a grateful pause is nothing spent

Can we unlatch to see Us clear
And offer watered heaven through our knowing tears
That ARE our eyes protruding out and out
By now as if a browfull stamp
In are's arms we should rock
And not a second later glitchfuljolt
That mind can fix in bespoke coded watch

Something moves.
And IS reminds us back
Of what that is, it never stops
And is as ready reeking real.as.
You honed zoned can e'yar reach
In heeding reading of the rocks
The journey of
It is experienced
Cause of breaking rifts
Pi seen of pieces as the dice
Reveals a piecemeal wholedeal

Did i forget to mention
Division of dimension
solo uno turn of living spokey
Smoky whole.

Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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