An Elegy To All Of The Sky. Poem by Lazarus Knix

An Elegy To All Of The Sky.

Rating: 5.0


Citadels race in luminous grace.
Gold and free-formed by water whisked up,
Into blue mist, like souls without weight.

Beauty runs flame through the mountain base.
And as her horsemen spur their gallops,
Citadels race in luminous grace.

Into blue mist, like souls without weight,
Flowing, clear blood builds castles above.
Not one vapor shall be put to waste.

My one tongue kneels, the eyes control taste.
When following rising turtle doves,
Into blue mist, like souls without weight.

The chariots halt- A light is cut.
Yet in my memories, and in us-
Citadels race in luminous grace,
Into blue mist, like souls without weight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 22 August 2009

wow awesome imagery and figurative language...fine rhymes and diction too...10+++

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Meggie Gultiano 22 August 2009

a nice piece..worth reading for..thanks for sharing

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