An English Field, In Ripe Poem by Mike Bell

An English Field, In Ripe

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We four-squared the fields,
Measuring the flat-topped hedges,
Of briared histories,
With a quart of different scales:
A brace of busmans' holidays,
(We ploughed our city trades of measurements) .

But the ungrazed clump-suck of meadow,
Brought us both back from town,
And to talk of easelled-landscapes.
Ahead, as usual, the others, a decade behind,
Avoid such muddied reflections,
Puddle-stuck below.

At this indoor hour, with these paints,
To draw that sunset December march:
A survey of possible Roman villa,
Outlying farmhouses converted with other currencies,
The Ripe red brick long-dead slaughterhouse,
And a paced friendship - best not set-aside.

An English Field, In Ripe
Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: countryside
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After a walk across fields of Ripe, with friends, dogs and sunsets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 December 2015

Lovely depiction of the essence of surveyor's duty, well articulated and subtly penned in poetic diction with insight. Lovely piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mike. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 07 December 2015

A very well written piece, Mike. Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2015

Measuring the flat-topped hedges, Of briared histories, , ....is very amazing definitely with interesting imagery. Wisely drafted poem shared with reality.10

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