Deb Panda

Rookie - 360 Points (1992 / KEONJHAR, ODISHA, INDIA)

An Evening Spirit Stuck, Down Hillsides - Poem by Deb Panda

Words: beats- elude my heart-
In a gloom- stuck evening spirit far,
Reminds the beauty -hillsides plot;
Whose smile emptied- with thoughts;
Lifting the encumbered soul from dart!

Oblige! Meager I can afford;
To forsake the spirit tuned with-
Music of your blessings; sad!
Oh' Muse! Searched, limped; but dismay!
Found the dust; last I cared.

Austere! I looked with all my bid-
Adieu! Into my worldly stature-
And again was I lost; wits prayed-
Reminds; the oath before you;
Pen; I had all my virtuous odd.

Found! All my wit failed to find;
For your words; filled my vacant soul;
Glory was lost; brittle to bind-
Us; The humanity worshipped ever,
Revert; this walk with the wind.


Comments about An Evening Spirit Stuck, Down Hillsides by Deb Panda

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (10/12/2012 9:50:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Taking with me the desire to come back to your poems. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Anita Sehgal (10/6/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    well written... good read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prasant Behera (10/1/2012 10:29:00 AM)

    good one...... keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2012



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