An Ocean Apart Poem by Tango

An Ocean Apart

Rating: 4.5


Even though we live,
an ocean apart,
somehow gradually,
you have crept into my heart.
Talking to each other nearly every day,
discussing any subject come what may.
To each other,
our innermost secrets we confide,
honest and open, nothing to hide.
Who knows, to where our friendship will lead,
like a flower perhaps It will blossom, and bloom,
from just one little seed.

Tango.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 06 May 2009

Sweet romantic poem.....

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

A hand held out in love friendship and good will...and a warm heart too...good write, Tango...pleasing to mind...10

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 09 May 2009

Over distances friendship bridges are built, chance encounters, near or far, a look, a word, a hand held out - taken - all are seeds...who knows what the future holds for any of us, but caring, whatever the level, for someone is as beautiful as your write Tango.

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great diction and superb imagery..amazing poem!

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

very nice verses...lovely indeed...10

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Nangula Immanuel 06 May 2009

aww, that's really sweet! I feel that i am getting closer to someone on this website too. Its real nice! Beautiful poem. thanx for sharing.

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