Beneath the fathoms, of salty waves,
is a world of splendour and under water caves.
Rainbow coloured coral, that's sharp to touch,
set in under water beauty that we both love so much.
Deep in a search for lost pirate booty,
we came across a world of outstanding beauty.
We found a wreck, we had not seen before.
We could see she was a Gallion, a Spanish Man of War.
Into her hull we swam like fish in this underwater haven,
of ecstasy and bliss.
We found a ship, but there was no booty,
but we did find love and underwater beauty.
In a world that's free and full of wonder,
but not if man makes another stupid blunder.
If we search deep enough then we may see the answers within a sea of our own or others experiences.Love Duncan
Rosie, this is beautiful! I feel as tho' I shall come face to face with a bubble-blowing fish any moment! Great work, but you need to check comma placement. Scarlett
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I would like to translate this poem
All very romanitc stuff, galleons, and treasure trove. Nice subject, nicely constructed and flowing well. Love Ernestine XXX