An Unforgettable Blossom Poem by nimal dunuhinga

An Unforgettable Blossom

Rating: 5.0


If you bloom at the razor's edge,
Then I have to get ready for the war my dearest.
If I die in the battlefield,
Please bury me in an unknown lover's graveyard.

* A young recruit scribbles on the rifle butt while resting in a campsite.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 06 September 2008

Your words inspire, enchant and touch the heart of the reader. Another beautiful example of your magnificent poetic craft. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 27 August 2008

Lovely, poignant, elegiac. Everything that a good-bye poem should be. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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