And Just Because... Poem by Amber Millar

And Just Because...

Rating: 5.0


Just because she comes off strong,
That doesn't mean she doesn't cry herself to sleep,
Just because she says nothing's wrong,
That doesn't mean she's OK,
Can't you see she's lying through her back teeth?
If only you saw her,
Cracks in the pavement are just reminders that no matter how strong you are,
Everything falls apart,
Just because...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Solan-robertson 09 February 2008

Amber, I love that cracks in the pavement line too - you have such insight for someone so young. keep writing always. jane s

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Bill Smith 22 January 2008

Cracks in the pavement are just reminders that no matter how strong you are, Everything falls apart, couple of great lines there, enjoyed smiffy

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