Angel In A Glass Box Poem by Sierra Love

Angel In A Glass Box

Rating: 5.0


he holds my heart
so hard it hurts
so gentle it brings tears to my eyes
he is the beat
reminding my lips to breath
telling my breath to stop
but urging my love on
does he know how much it hurts
to look and not touch
my angel in a glass box

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 24 December 2008

this has great contrast... hurt- gentle and beat- stop. written very well. Becca

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i love how u describes the heart, angel in a glass box, very fragile, yes something beautiful, nice piece with a 10 :)

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