Brie Carter

Rookie (March 12,1994 / Dalton)

Angel in Heaven


One night as I sat beneath a tree
I cried to our dear Lord above
I looked up into the open sky and hoped he'd answer me
Lord I'm lost, I've traveled far but I still seem to roam
Please light the way and lead me back home

I told Him of my burdens
And of the everlasting sadness in my heart
That from his lost love I never felt so apart
Why did you take my grandad, Lord?
I just can not comprehend why
No longer can I touch his face or hold his hand
His loving smile has gone

I'm angry, Lord
I'm missing him like mad
I drowning in my greif and sorrow
Please help me heal my sad

It was then I heard his gentle voice
And felt his presence near
How I longed for him to stay
As I cried another tear

He said, 'I'm an angel now
My spirit is free
I am an angel in heaven
So please don't cry for me
I was chosen by our Lord above and now I am in his care
When you need me look inside your heart
I promise I'll be there
I am an angel in heaven now
So if you can not find your way
or the road home just seems to far
Look to the sky, I'll be your guiding star'
He said, 'I'm an angel now
My spirit is free
I'ma n angel in heaven now
No need to cry for me.'

Submitted: Friday, October 03, 2008

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  • Rookie ~Just Fine~ (6/29/2009 4:31:00 PM)

    awwww.....i really like this.....great poem.
    very sweet ending!
    keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points ~ Evelina Kononenko ~ (6/26/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    awwww.......... very sad poem but i loved it its very asome that you have jesus on your side asome i have him on my side too. keep it up i give you 10/10 good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/26/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    he read this every day
    and he says what I say
    precious child of mine
    no need to moan an whine
    for pain is absent of me
    and my old eyes do see
    Walk i can, even run
    I'm in the light of the son
    so take a break and smile
    it's this i do wish my child
    i look o'er you each day
    I'm the footstep along the way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tessa Richardson (1/30/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    great poem =)
    you're lucky he answered you...
    I stopped trying with god, he never
    answered me.
    I worship someone else now
    but i give you 10/10
    =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sarah Holmes (12/16/2008 12:48:00 PM)

    Another well written poem.
    you have a beautiful way with words.
    Sorry for your loss.
    God Bless x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/7/2008 10:05:00 AM)

    well penned...........keep the faith............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimzy Sue (11/1/2008 10:30:00 AM)

    this is awsome, sad and touching poem. Sorry for your loss.
    It's not easy to lose our loved ones. Though i never got the chance to hold my grandfather, even he's chosen to be an angel but a li'l too soon. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/15/2008 9:11:00 AM)

    so lovely and true, thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ryan Thompson (10/8/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    that was so beautiful i loved it

    -ryan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tia Maria (10/3/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    that is so beautiful .... :) 10 (Report) Reply

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