(March 5th / Akron Ohio)

What do you think this poem is about?

Angels

angels gather all around
angels down here on the ground
angels wings are white and frail
angels won't sing there hearts to hell
angels sad and
angels mad
angels may not sing again
angels fly up to the sky
to see a place that we recognize
so angels smile across the day
and when night comes they
hit the hay

Submitted: Friday, May 09, 2008
Edited: Monday, May 12, 2008


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  • Ian Singer (11/18/2008 9:46:00 AM)

    very welll written i liked it

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  • Death's forever life (10/21/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    I like the repetitions but the ending was bland.

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  • , aryaindia (9/8/2008 10:11:00 AM)

    The split up of lines can be redone to give a better effect. But the overall worth of the poem is not undermined. Blessings.

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