A wish so dear
When arms in arms
The aroma of your bosom
The satins and the silks
Woven on your chest
Like a cloth black
In motifs of love
By the girl in her youth
The shepherdess
I searched universe
Your love is like
The opiate of my imagination
In addiction my love
For the red poppy
Your memory is
Like the face of Marry
Your beauty is
Like the hand of Jesus
Wake me up
For now I have fallen
Opened have thou
The mysteries of my being
You say
This is another beginning
(A sequel to Reshma Ramesh, Balcony)
22/10/2008
a good poem...love, in its sublime form, is pure devotion...well written, Sadiq...10
sadiq, wat a beautiful poem with nice comparisons-- but if I may say something-- I am a hindu by birth and have a great devotion to Mother Mary- so I would not like any comparison of humans with her. This hurt my sentiments a little bit. Dont take offence-I just voiced my thought-- otherwise you are a great poet and your sequels to Resh's are as good as hers are to yours. regards anju ++++10
this is a lovely poem.needs to be reread, i can't pin point, but i felt there is a kind of serenity and devotion in your poem.loved it10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely feeling told in mellowed tone........good