Sadiqullah Khan


*slow The Love (Sequels) - Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Hast thou seen my love many times
The morning dew or the dusk in the eve
For the lovers’ caravan to the tavern goes
Neither mosque nor temple
But heart is reverend
The temple of love

Hast thou seen my love many times
The ignorant the nescient
For they think the story of love
Shall end here with morality they preach
Of freedom unaware possessed by spirits
Of hatred alone shall one day come
To the city of love in the tavern baptized

Hast thou seen my love many times
In sequels the songs of your love
For the honor like the noble Othello
When the Lago plays wits in hold
And when all that join the chorus coarse
In preposterous vulgarity in judgment sit

Nay the tragedy of love in doom
The moth shall burn for his destiny
The flame of love but just a flicker
How many flames they portend extinguished
Never shall the flame of your love go down
Never shall moth born to burn leave the flame
28/1/2009


Comments about *slow The Love (Sequels) by Sadiqullah Khan

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/2/2009 1:09:00 AM)

    The ring of fire............love is so much to loose. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (1/30/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    Written from the heart, romantic and touching, thank you,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (1/29/2009 2:52:00 PM)

    Some Shakespeare, some Auden for this stylistically faultless poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (1/29/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    i think it is sequel to Anjali's poem
    Wonderful sequel to wonderful poem
    great write..........
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira .....ir (1/29/2009 10:58:00 AM)

    It has philosophical touch... Another classi poem... I think your words r clear nd powerful bt ppl like me take at lest 1 whole day 2 understand your poems.. +10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 741 Points Sreelekha Premjit (1/29/2009 2:50:00 AM)

    Loved your poem. What a lovely picturisation of love! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points C. P. Sharma (1/29/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    Love poetry attains commanding heights in the love sequals of you two. If love be the food of life, go on.......................
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (1/29/2009 2:20:00 AM)

    WOWWWW so beautiful! ! ! ! !
    let the enemies of love
    burn in their own hate
    A master craftsman you are Sadiq
    You have painted this canvas with
    golden colours straignt from thy heart
    and water you have used
    my tears to lighten the shades
    A++++and many 10ssssss
    Anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (1/29/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    Gives a dignity to love, that many shun away today, in the quest for image love. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (1/29/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    Enchanting poem..a classical passionate write..nice flow and to read..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/29/2009 12:18:00 AM)

    beautiful piece. very shakespearean (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/29/2009 12:18:00 AM)

    beautiful piece. very shakespearean (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (1/29/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    You are doing sequels as a song of love with the theme slow the love and a touch of a bit of the moth and flame...where all speaks of love as a romantic mood...You are gifted to the flow and use of words, truly classic....written in a free verse form though presented in an ageless structure...10+++++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 25, 2009


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