Another Day Poem by Doris Cornago

Another Day

Rating: 5.0


Drops
of tears
Mix in with
Perspiration
In desperation
Hanging by the
Skin of my teeth
Seeking embrace
Not yet a disgrace
Just making through
Another day, another
Way to plug holes on
Walls, wail with wally
Without a doubt, nada
No one knows the time
None matters, only key
Clicking my day clock
Spread feathers out
Shared blue bread
Show-off peacock
Hearing the shh
Heart whispers
Hopping out
Beating on
Bobbing
Up and
Down

Another Day
Monday, August 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan,surrealism ,survival,survivor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Embrace all that you are and never let go. Whatever is happening now can't be worst. Death is not a door, it's a wall and you'll do everything to keep on living. I knew this when about to lose control of life, I want to live. I'll do everything to keep on living. Another epiphany. How about you?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 09 August 2018

Keeping your head above water will let you see a new path instead of becoming overwhelmed. Really good write. A 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2018

It is a beautiful philosophical poem having touching expression and brilliant theme. The structure of the poem is nice too. Thanks for sharing.10

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Doris Cornago 06 August 2018

The poem is not perfectly shaped because life's not perfect. As the scientists have figured, the earth wobbles and could lose its rhythmic roll around the sun. What happens then? Do we need to worry? No, it's just another day to keep on living.

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