Another Love Poem Poem by Vini Carberry

Another Love Poem

Rating: 5.0


My life is nothing but pain,
A life of sorrow. A rose in the rain.
I've lost all i ever had,
But when I'm with you my life is'nt that bad.
I still have something to fight for,
So i will fight until i can no more.
I will not stop 'til I'm the one you love,
I'll get back up when push comes to shove.
Because for now thats all I can do.
I will proove my love to you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mysterious Girl 15 September 2006

Vini you are a wonderful poet. You put such emotion and feeling into your poems that it seems to come alive. I am hooked on you, I must read more! *+*MG*+*

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Anjana Aravind 07 August 2006

Vini, this poem is quite beautiful. Do keep writing Anjana

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Kee Thampi 27 July 2006

Your gorgeous as you always are So beautiful no one could believe That you could find such beauty In someone like me But I. like this poem with my heart....... A life of sorrow. A rose in the rain. I've lost all i ever had, But when I'm with you my life is'nt that bad. I still have something to fight for, So i will fight until i can no more. I will not stop 'til I'm with the one i love, Ill get back up when push comes to shove. You write with most lovable way and innocently

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Thats beaitful deary, completely beautiful. I'm becoming a large fan of your poetry.

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