Approaching Winter Poem by Jason Doyle

Approaching Winter



Approaching winter, Earth holds its breath.
Trees, unweighted by life
Scratch the sky.
The wipers scrape, waving to each other.
An inch of road becomes an inch of gold
Worth risking body, worth risking soul.
The stars become shaded,
Their insignificance! has them faded.
Birds sing all day
They can’t remember night.
Children live under a sodium sky
And never wonder why.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Children live under a sodium sky And never wonder why. .... beautiful description of season.... we must love nature....good poem read mine why do we neglect nature... child...school

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Gutter Box 17 January 2009

Very descriptive poem...great job.

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Sid John Gardner. 17 January 2009

Nice write Jason, Good Imagery.Thanks for sharing. Sid.

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