Viraj Bhanshaly (England)
Arrogance of a Poet
Reading, reading, reading aloud,
Out to an audience or a large crowd,
A lovely poem, simple like this,
Rhyming couplets, O what a bliss,
Next a succulent simile,
Like this, like that or just like me.
Alliteration, simile all in one,
The Sun looked down, thinking well done!
Woah, personification, the touch of skill
But ofcourse, I can still
Go further and further with these thoughts,
Enjambment used, eat my shorts!
My skill unmatched, the audience applaud,
Score,10/10, definitely assured.
But still this skill was not enough,
They believed my poem was still a rough
Copy or a draft, not the final one,
A poem to impress, that could have won.
And so I wander back, like a whale
To feed my young poems a treacherous tale,
To which they will, rebel and fight
For why did that poem not set alight
The crowd with all its great talent,
But I will not, never, relent
In making you poems walk into fame,
And there goes my poetic technique again...
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n making you poems walk into fame,
And there goes my poetic technique again...
wow
surely I think your this poem will walk in high fame
Coz your poetic technique is unique like a game,
it was like making a wild lion tame
even if all are to say shame shame shame
good poem
surely a tenner from me
-10 anjali
A good poem with rhyme.............A poem is never complete but abadoned........good`write.........