C.N.Premkumar (love poems, Veda of love, Life and love)


Clouds Of Love - Poem by C.N.Premkumar (love poems, Veda of love, Life and love)

Confessions of Krishna - 10


Oh golden twilight clouds,
Go far with the message in my songs
To where my beloved weeps for me
Wipe her tears and tell her she is mine

Let her know how sad I feel
In this world so unreal
In this suffocating silence
Left by her long absence

Carry the vapors of tears
From my eyes as your clouds of blue
Stay above her, high in the sky
Inundate her, with droplets of my sorrow

Let the thunders in my heart
Shiver all the Ashta-Dikpalas
With the reverberations of the mantra
‘Krishna loves Radha’

Let the lightning in my heart
Spread around the horizon
All the sparks of love I kept undisturbed
For the queen of my heart

Take her up in the whirlwinds of my mind
And carry her in the mighty winds
Take her in your stormy hands
Place her in my arms which crave for her touch


(This is an imaginary poem written as narrated by God Krishna to his childhood love Radha, to show how sublime and deep his love was.)

Ashta-Dikpalas- Gods ruling the eight sides. They are Indra (East) , Agni (Southeast) , Yama (South) , Nirrith (Southwest) , Varuna (West) , Kubera (North) and Eesana (Northeast) .

Mantra - is a sound, syllable, word, or group of words that are considered capable of 'creating transformation.” Their use and type varies according to the school and philosophy associated with the mantra.

‘Krishna loves Radha’ - With Krishna, Radha is acknowledged as the Supreme Goddess, for it is said that she controls Krishna with Her love. It is believed that Krishna enchants the world, but Radha enchants even Him. Therefore She is the supreme goddess of all.


Comments about Clouds Of Love by C.N.Premkumar (love poems, Veda of love, Life and love)

  • Silver Star - 4,272 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/11/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    A very creative composition. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 29,967 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/24/2015 10:53:00 AM)

    Mera paigham muhabbat hay Jahan tak pahunche
    (My message is love Where ever it can raech....................Jigar Muradabadi)
    Besides liking this wonderful poem, I also liked the informative poet's note............10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,293 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/19/2014 8:18:00 AM)

    Long days after hear it's resounding the Sanskrit legendary poet MAHAKAVI Kalidash's voice once again from 'KUMARSAMVABAM Kabbya. Imagery and expression perhaps resounding nearest to that classical poetic essence. May it be poet inspired by Indian classical treasure! There in 'Kumarsamvabam', Jakshya, the hero in confinement, sending his messages imagining cloud as his carrier from the top of Ramgiri hills, for his beloved Kanta who stayed long...long away from him. Just it echoes while reading this very poem.
    In another sense poet has tried much to illustrate Krishna-Radha relation from Baisnav philosophy by rhyme. Well it works. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,272 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/23/2014 8:18:00 PM)

    Full of feeling and pregnant with passion. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (12/11/2013 1:36:00 PM)

    a beautiful well written poem let the lightning in my heart spread around the horizon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (9/24/2013 4:04:00 AM)

    Excellent poem, very romantic indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/21/2013 2:27:00 AM)

    Wow. wonderful poem on love.. Beautiful way you have presented it. Loved it. +++ 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,344 Points Ramesh Rai (6/27/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    beautiful love message. liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (11/2/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    Carry the vapors of tears
    From my eyes as your clouds of blue

    Let the thunders in my heart
    What the amazing verses.Very strong with fantastic fashion.my vote is 9.Well done! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 478 Points Ency Bearis (10/11/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Superb poem, great vivid write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,539 Points Marieta Maglas (6/22/2012 11:42:00 AM)

    Expressive and very thoughtful
    Good job (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,344 Points Ramesh Rai (6/20/2012 6:47:00 AM)

    I must like to say a beautiful poem, just like Meghdoot. a poem to feel, to realise the separation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 41 Points Laron Green Sr. (2/4/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    fantastic poem touchy poem excellent (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,622 Points Ken E Hall (12/19/2010 4:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem of a loved one soothing to read....nice...regards 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (8/21/2010 9:43:00 AM)

    Let the thunders in my heart
    Shiver all the Ashta-Dikpalas
    With the reverberations of the mantra
    ‘Krishna loves Radha’

    repeat in your heart the holy name of God millions of times and you will have the great vision of God and incalculable inner peace. i hve met Sanyasis and Sanyasins who spend hours on end repeating the holy name of Rama and Krishna and Radha. i hve met Chrístians who likewise repeat the holy name of Jesus. there is light in their face and a peace in their movements. you have brought in a wonderful pont through your meditative poem.. a great religious poet. thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (7/30/2010 3:27:00 PM)

    Oh golden twilight clouds,
    Go far with the message in my songs
    To where my beloved weeps for me
    Wipe her tears and tell her she is mine

    an exceptionally beautiful stanza, a poem f devoted beauty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Rachel Ann Butler (7/29/2010 8:37:00 AM)

    However nothing like Love, love and life poetry Rachel Ann Butler your name sake. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Trivedi (7/26/2010 5:57:00 AM)

    It's really very beautifull i can say. It's beauty is so pure just like Radha Krishna love. Any other words to appricate this i'm not getting any words..... Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (7/25/2010 12:29:00 PM)

    Nice Landscape and rythamic atmosphere of real love, and the sound also some strong some nice to hear, Yeh! Cloudy and cool situation, thanks,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2010 1:56:00 AM)

    h golden twilight clouds,
    Go far with the message in my songs.. exact replica of message sent by yaksha to his wife in mundra..by kalidasa. well depicted poem.. i liked it....10










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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 10, 2011


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