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C.N.Premkumar (love poems, Veda of love, Life and love)


CLOUDS OF LOVE


Confessions of Krishna - 10


Oh golden twilight clouds,
Go far with the message in my songs
To where my beloved weeps for me
Wipe her tears and tell her she is mine

Let her know how sad I feel
In this world so unreal
In this suffocating silence
Left by her long absence

Carry the vapors of tears
From my eyes as your clouds of blue
Stay above her, high in the sky
Inundate her, with droplets of my sorrow

Let the thunders in my heart
Shiver all the Ashta-Dikpalas
With the reverberations of the mantra
‘Krishna loves Radha’

Let the lightning in my heart
Spread around the horizon
All the sparks of love I kept undisturbed
For the queen of my heart

Take her up in the whirlwinds of my mind
And carry her in the mighty winds
Take her in your stormy hands
Place her in my arms which crave for her touch


(This is an imaginary poem written as narrated by God Krishna to his childhood love Radha, to show how sublime and deep his love was.)

Ashta-Dikpalas- Gods ruling the eight sides. They are Indra (East) , Agni (Southeast) , Yama (South) , Nirrith (Southwest) , Varuna (West) , Kubera (North) and Eesana (Northeast) .

Mantra - is a sound, syllable, word, or group of words that are considered capable of 'creating transformation.” Their use and type varies according to the school and philosophy associated with the mantra.

‘Krishna loves Radha’ - With Krishna, Radha is acknowledged as the Supreme Goddess, for it is said that she controls Krishna with Her love. It is believed that Krishna enchants the world, but Radha enchants even Him. Therefore She is the supreme goddess of all.

Submitted: Monday, July 19, 2010
Edited: Thursday, February 10, 2011

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  • Aung Si (11/2/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    Carry the vapors of tears
    From my eyes as your clouds of blue

    Let the thunders in my heart
    What the amazing verses.Very strong with fantastic fashion.my vote is 9.Well done! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (6/20/2012 6:47:00 AM)

    I must like to say a beautiful poem, just like Meghdoot. a poem to feel, to realise the separation. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/21/2010 9:43:00 AM)

    Let the thunders in my heart
    Shiver all the Ashta-Dikpalas
    With the reverberations of the mantra
    ‘Krishna loves Radha’

    repeat in your heart the holy name of God millions of times and you will have the great vision of God and incalculable inner peace. i hve met Sanyasis and Sanyasins who spend hours on end repeating the holy name of Rama and Krishna and Radha. i hve met Chrístians who likewise repeat the holy name of Jesus. there is light in their face and a peace in their movements. you have brought in a wonderful pont through your meditative poem.. a great religious poet. thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Terence George Craddock (7/30/2010 3:27:00 PM)

    Oh golden twilight clouds,
    Go far with the message in my songs
    To where my beloved weeps for me
    Wipe her tears and tell her she is mine

    an exceptionally beautiful stanza, a poem f devoted beauty (Report) Reply

  • Anita Trivedi (7/26/2010 5:57:00 AM)

    It's really very beautifull i can say. It's beauty is so pure just like Radha Krishna love. Any other words to appricate this i'm not getting any words..... Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Kumar (7/25/2010 12:29:00 PM)

    Nice Landscape and rythamic atmosphere of real love, and the sound also some strong some nice to hear, Yeh! Cloudy and cool situation, thanks,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2010 1:56:00 AM)

    h golden twilight clouds,
    Go far with the message in my songs.. exact replica of message sent by yaksha to his wife in mundra..by kalidasa. well depicted poem.. i liked it....10










    ... (Report) Reply

  • Dale Mullock (7/20/2010 3:03:00 PM)

    Hello there!

    This is great poem, if you take away the religion concept of it all and strip it down to its basics then you have a superb love poem mixed with the natural world in metaphor. Some wonderful wording and great detail into the realms of storms to highlight the power and terrestrialness of it all. Nicely expressed and writen!

    Dale :) (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/20/2010 8:39:00 AM)

    Hon‘ble Poet Sir
    This creation is best of yours…carries forward to realm of sublimity and divinity…where heart of Lord Krishna becoming sanguineous and ours too…thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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