amidst that elite crowd
he stood there to be divorced
allegations all he accepted
denials there was none
his lawyer thought
he had taken a dead case
no other child in this world
should be in his child's place..he thought
WHAT THEN....
YOU ACCEPT ALL ALLEGATIONS
YOU DID NOT DENY ANY
SHALL I GIVE IT AS DECLARED
THE DIVORCE
no sir
i want to live with them
i still have love for them
HOW WILL YOU
THEY DO NOT WANT YOU
HOW WILL YOU LIVE WITH THEM
i will sir
he said sending a chit to the chairperson
which just read
AS A GHOST
The divorced slid and fell
the bottle he emptied out was not just alcohol
as his eyes closed
his mom came to his mind
when he lost at school and cried
she told there is a life ahead
she stood there for him
A very tragic piece Samanyan....well written as it definitely makes an impact on the reader...
The divorced slid and fell the bottle he emptied out was not just alcohol as his eyes closed his mom came to his mind when he lost at school and cried she told there is a life ahead she stood there for him i liked the way you have put it, sam.
A very sad, but well written poem about a subject most don't care to discuss. A good write Samayan, I enjoyed it. Your friend Lynn
A poem of high drama and tragedy. Your last lines are very poignant and bittersweet.10/10. Kind wishes, Sandra
separation from our loveones can be devastating to children-and adults as well.But even when a divorce takes place between two people, if there is love, their spirit is forever present.Thanks for inviting me to read-one of my children is having a personal experience with divorce..I feel that the ghost/spirit of my husband is an ever present in the home. a 10+++
life tastes sweeter as and when we give more than we take more...leading to a sweeter death? Perhaps...a real life situation presented well in a sentimental wrapper...good...10
Here also his mother comes to his rescue. Mother is mother who is second to none.
sam! unless i am seeing something different from the other readers? what i see is the taking of ones own life, rather than lose the ones he loves through divorce. anyways! a ten for my interpretation of it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
No decree can stop the spirit from loving! Love spirit is high power no power can stop it! Nice one!