***as I Am Far Away*** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***as I Am Far Away***

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AS I AM FAR AWAY

Yet I am far away beyond as baffled as I am
silence when rocks the rune of resonance
pervading the fear across the mist of agony
blue still blemishes by the apprehension

word when wordless whispers breaking the ice
mirth slowly swaddles melting the reeks
yet soul knows the reels of tune where it is
but belief seems to riffle being far away

askance defers the ruse even by promises
trust never be befuddled by the rucks up
the inevitable as thy name is truth alone
I succumbed to believe as I am far away

the passion lest be encircled by the dappled dew
wishes refuge to breathe by the burden of bold sky
ice is when clear crystal by the transparency
as I am far away from a distance being discerned

reason loses its breath by the drifting shadows
resilience may not come again to room of dream,
hope diffuses to the thin air as if miffed ashore
the face seems to grimace by the rain intoned

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 December 2009

‘…blue still blemishes by the apprehension…’ Blue never burnishes blemishes into aspirations…Like an adage... Ms Nivedita UK

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Marieta Maglas 13 June 2009

''the inevitable as thy name is truth alone I succumbed to believe as I am far away'' wonderful similes.....10++

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Min Sia 15 October 2008

even so far away... This poem knocks me of my feet! ! ! No doubt..a 10!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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