As I Am The Candle In The Wind Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Am The Candle In The Wind

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As all her love had in her in dream
When stamped in rage reasoned saddened
Rousing her to reek of anger into tears sweetened
Tearing all her peace deterred impulse

She would come again someday
Needing my love once more
Like a lightening in the rain
And I do feel the story of love epitome

To escape out of window quelling
Beholding her beauty ravished
my desire being refracted at crisscross niggling
as sorrows scaffolding begin to grow bewailing.

Time may blush her bruised even black by the age
As I am the candle in the wind niggardly raving
When all my gestures may toss up one day
Out of innocence in all acceptances

Stunning words of her admiration
Falling like rain in summer to the plexus slaked
When you do exist absolute unseen as yet known
I am the candle in the wind exhausted beneath and beyond


Dr. subhendu kar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
poetry lover 27 August 2007

Very lovely, great write

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Lillian J. 27 August 2007

Eloquently beautiful work! Lilly :)

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Meggie Gultiano 30 August 2007

lovely poem..well penned!

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Bharati Nayak 23 January 2019

Stunning words of her admiration Falling like rain in summer to the plexus slaked When you do exist absolute unseen as yet known I am the candle in the wind exhausted beneath and beyond - - - - -A lovely poem with fine poetic expression !

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Tsira Goge 21 March 2008

subhendu ' I am the candle in the wind exhausted beneath and beyond' Yours self-denying burning it is not useless, my fine friend... Sincerely, Tsira

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Eithne Queen of Celts 04 March 2008

such beautiful poetic imagery! the rain and the wind 'go well' with the candle.

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Ben Gieske 26 October 2007

I enjoyed all the adjectives and participles.

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yet another butiful piece of your thought........marvelously written and blended.....

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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