as I close my eyes
as when retired by remorse
into the deep darkness
all the gestured images
of my unbecoming gods rill on
and you sneak to me obsessively
yet all flicker beyond
as when lapped by your thrills
resourced as when cohered
as you embrace the grace
here and there or elsewhere
on the milieu of earthly sojourn
the storm when claps my dream
down to the reeks by the dusts
as I simply open the eyes
I do feel the pain by the sorrow
so lovingly said, well penned, and loving gentle flow of words! as if i was there..oh, this is nice piece.Thanks for sharing this one, Dr. Love, Meggie
A beautiful and poignant poem Dr. Kar! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! *10*! ! ! Best wishes Friend Thad
Filled with passion and realities that made our living on this world! Great verse! Perfect 10.
very sad and beautiful.A very delicate form of melancholy.
remarkably a very wonderful and great piece you have here, Dr. This is also a very deep one. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Love, Meggie
Dr. very beautiful and loved so much your way of write.............
Lovely work, it is so deep and very unique style of writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful capturing intense feeling thankyou for sharing that moment Chris 10