As I lay in this state
I am surrounded by darkness
And I can’t help but wait
As the light shines through
As the time goes by
The darkness fades
And I can’t help but cry
As the light begins to shine
As I begin to see
I think of the light
And how it set me free
As I start to wake
As I lay in this state
I see no darkness
And it’s not too late
To follow the light
As I lay in this state...
Very nice my friend, interesting poem of hope. I agree w/ some of the comments below, you have a gift to develop
you do have a real writting gift i really hope that you write more cause you are really great i love this poem
Beautifully written. You have a gift for writting! Write more! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem is awesome i love poetry you should check out some of my poetry too you are a creative writer and i would like to get to know you.........i like getting to know people