As I Razzle In Rain Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Razzle In Rain

Rating: 5.0


.the excellence of love
As I razzle in the rain
eye dazzles with tears
as it was fettered long.

When cowered by sadness
yet not lost but conquered
as love swayed again
like a fountain rolling
as tears dissolved in rain

when transcended
by tears to joy in unison,
like swaying of leaf
wetting my muse,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 10 November 2009

razzles in rain i love those words never heard them before 10

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Melvina Germain 28 October 2007

Precious love, pure and true weave it's way through this beautiful poem. A wonderful write Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina--

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Ewigi Liebe 24 October 2007

genuine faith of love..share with...believe on....always concerning that enriched in everything utterance and knowledge of excellence of love. nice penned.

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Patrice James 22 October 2007

very excellence of love....muse purest in the highest place. thanks for sharing..

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Emancipation Planz 22 October 2007

Your muse has the purest H2O that is softened by a conditioner that falls from the highest place.... One Peace at a Time xx

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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