As I Watch........... Poem by Zackory Kzeminski

As I Watch...........

Rating: 5.0


As i sit here watching the fire burn
i recall a time when all was fine
and as i watch that fire grow
i laugh as i come back to reality
and remember how things came to be
and at that moment my life breaks down
and as it breaks im forced to realise how dull
my life has been and how dull it will be
when im forced to remain in a life
a life in which solitude isnt how
i'd want to remain
so as i watch this fire burn
i reminess about my life i come to the reaization
about the way life works
and that is: Life will never cease with springing surprises unto all beings no matter the race or species

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

‘Life will never cease with springing surprises’ ~ Why not savor it? …face it? …enjoy it? ...rejoice it? ...fine write …thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 Surprise is spice… n

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David Beckham 31 July 2010

You excellently explored the inter-connectivity of words. It flowed just great and most importantly your message was on point. Excellent

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