As The Day Goes Poem by mestup poems

As The Day Goes

Rating: 5.0


Choices and wrong turns are made,
as the day goes and the sun fades.

People are loved and hearts broken;
as the day goes and words are spoken.

Smiles and frowns are shown on faces;
as the day goes and children play in open spaces.

Happiness and sadness are felt by all,
as the day goes and night falls.

Tears of joy and tears of pain are shed;
as the day goes and all are in bed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 11 March 2008

Sparkling imagery with in these lovely couplets. As the day goes we meet friends from afar, they fill our world with wonder no one car mar. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Coach Roth 08 March 2008

Love the repetition of 'as the day goes'...captures perfectly the longevity yet beauty of caring for children and the everyday tasks...nice job...Coach

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