Ashy Vapours Of Consciousness Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Ashy Vapours Of Consciousness

Rating: 5.0


The moon passes

But remains

Through ruptures

Of ashy vapours—

Silver-metallic, translucent,

With a proud and cold

Indifference,

Like those loves—passed

But permanently present

In our nebulous

Consciousness.



......................................................



Vapori Cenusii de Constiinta



Luna trece

Dar ramane

Prin zdrente

De vapori cenusii—

Argintiu-metalizata, translucida,

Cu o mandra si rece

Indiferenta,

Ca acele iubiri—trecute

Dar permanent prezente

In nebuloasa noastra

Constiinta.

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2018

Indifference Like those loves — passed But permanently present In our nebulous Consciousness.......i love these lines. Thank you dear madam for this beautiful poem.

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Consciousness! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Hazel Durham 21 May 2016

Pure beauty of your words that embrace with a truth of the past that are like cobwebs in our mind catching glimpses of past lovers that never leave us but wander with us and still bring their light and darkness to our lives! Amazing write!

1 0 Reply
Terry Craddock 09 May 2016

'ashy vapours —... In our nebulous Consciousness.' this intrigues as a surrealist metaphor for life, loved it 10+

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success