At Every Site Of U Poem by Blake Ryder

At Every Site Of U

Rating: 3.5


i can feel my body start to tremble
my body temperature starts to rise
my heartbeats getting faster
its all because of u

my mind is going in circles
my thoughts are everywhere
i start to stutter my words
its all because of u

my eyes are being focused
im listening to every word
my body feels like its frozen
its all because of u

my hands start to shake
i start to lose my breath
my senses are going crzy
its all because of u

who wud have thought such beauty
cud take a human form
all these things take place
at every site of U

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Harrie 26 August 2005

I love this feeling, the awkwardness and excitement of new love...ahhhh

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 August 2005

Things often change after getting a new prescription! OH...check out the (temperature) . I have a sense of your writing style but I suggest typing out 'temperature'..it would add to the heat of the moment.

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